5 comments on “99 Word Flash Fiction Challenge {16}

  1. Sarah and Amber, the Killer Ladies of Flash! Beware their black pens…

    Actually, I appreciate good writing that can flesh out a dark scenario with raw humanity. There’s enough ambiguity in this story that the reader can fill in the exact relationship which is a good hook in flash. And in the end, it doesn’t matter if he is guilty or innocent or if she was the victim or the victim’s mother, it ends. Great flash and chilling to think of the musical score in the background!

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