Do you ever feel like this: Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! ?
I thought that surely after school started back up that things would calm down and I would soon find a new normalcy- after my children abandoned me for a better education.
Boy was I wrong. But that’s just life. It gets busy. and sometimes stays that way…. for what seems like forever. And once again I missed two flash fiction challenges (ugh!). I find that I write better and push myself further on my WIP when I participate in Charli’s challenges.
The September 3, 2014 challenge from over at Carrot Ranch Communications prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) include food in your story.
I absolutely loved this weeks prompt. Food! Something we tend to take for granted when we have a plentiful of. Something we covet the most when we deprive our selves of it. Oh, how my mind jumped from possibility to possibility on what to write about. I’ll share a few ideas…
- A mom trying out new recipes for her family (that idea was too close to home, my family wishes I would stop trying out new recipes and just stick to the tried and true.)
- A person cooking a special dinner for a spouse (again too close to home, that always ends in tears and my husband having to take over and fix my disasters/running to grab fast food.)
- A person who stops reliving all of her kitchen nightmares and write about a pissed off woman (YES! That one!)
Deadly Dinner
As usual, she began preparing dinner, but today she carried on in a new calm manner. At first she thought to make his favorite but that would lead to suspect after last night. Spaghetti was too soft anyway.
No, she was making her favorite instead, chicken fried steak smothered in gravy, the earthy smell of boiling potatoes already permeating the air.
Her decision came easily after seeing her reflection in the now broken mirror. Carefully, she ground the glass and combined it with the flour, setting aside some for the potatoes.
Tonight was her turn to leave a mark.
So how did I do?
~AJP
P.S. If you get a chance, head over to the Carrot Ranch Communications and see all of the other wonderful pieces written by a great group of people.
Well, makes me think twice about eating your food…
But intriguing as ever, makes me want to read more of where that story was going
And you know you will find your newfound rhythm when you need it the most!
Oh, and KEEP WRITING! 😁
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After tonight’s fiasco, it is probably a good idea to stay away from my cooking.
Thank you!
Omgosh, it’s like you want me to write or something ….. 🙂
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Yes but we learn by trial and error, can’t come out of the box as a professional chef
You saw right through me! How did you ever figure that out??
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Yes! You went with pissed off woman. Good choice! It’s so subtle, the last line about her leaving a mark. Not only a pissed off woman, but a battered one. Good use of details–the earthy smell of potatoes as they boil; her using the glass he smashed. Sharp writing. And I’m thrilled that you notice a difference in writing your WIP as you practice the constraints in flash. I’m still searching for that long “aaahh…” I think it’s elusive!
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Thank you Charli!
I am glad the my exploration of the senses came across. It is always a little nerve wracking to post a piece, even if small, for fear that no one else will see the picture I am trying to “paint”.
I really do enjoy these flashes, Thank you!
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I enjoyed the idea of using the broken mirror to exact revenge. Very Edgar Allen Poe in its horror.
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Thank you! I figured poison in the food was too over done lol.
I do love a creepy Poe story.
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Scart!
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Ooops! Scary!
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As usual, outstanding and concise storytelling. I’ll definitely remember to never make you mad at me. 😉
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Lol you are silly.
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Great revenge flash and I love the way her weapon of choice is reflected (pun intended) in the glass of the mirror.
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Thank you so much!
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Ouch. That is fantastic. Glad you found time in your busy schedule to write this. (Ironically, this is the week I missed it because of mine.)
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Thanks!
That explains why I couldn’t find yours lol.
Well here’s hopping to a less hectic week so that we have time to do this weeks prompt!
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