10 comments on “99 Word Flash Fiction Challenge {12}

  1. Funny how we don’t think of certain things like fruit, but you found a crate of inspiration. Grudges are so deep and sometimes so ridiculous. You’ve captured so well in your writing, that essence of a grudge–people making up their own ideas for the reason; the truth being as simple as two seeds planted long ago. Way to take this prompt and deliver up a deep dish of human behavior.

    Orange bread? Ha! Well, it was probably worth a try! I like to put orange peel into chocolate chip cookies, which for some reason sound very good today…Great flash!

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  3. I love the way you worked your dislike of “It’s not fair” into your flash. I’m sure the brothers think it’s not fair. Well done!

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  4. Impressive Amber. That could be turned into the basis of a longer piece. Funny where inspiration comes to you – a simple matter of normal children’s spats over fairness can lead to a fruity dilemma. Thankyou for your kind words also. Glad you enjoyed it.

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